Wednesday, October 17, 2012

It's Not A Haunted House After All!

It was a dark and scary night in our new house.  Everybody was asleep except for me.  I couldn't sleep because I wasn't comfortable in a big wide house.  Suddenly, I heard the door squeak open. The noise of footsteps went louder and louder as it was heading towards my room. I could see a shadow of a man coming closer and closer and again, it felt like it was heading towards my room.

I was really scared and horrified that I wanted to run to my parent's room but if I did I’ll be running into the man.  Instead of running, I hid under my blanket and hoped the man wouldn't find me.

I could hear him taking off his shoes at the door of my room. “Why should he take off his shoes, a scary  man would not listen to a sign that I wrote up saying please take off your shoes before you enter?” I had a feeling that it wasn't a scary man, I came out of my blanket and looked at who it was.  It wasn't a horrifying man after all, it was my dad! “Whew” I was relieved! “Afterwards I have a long story to tell dad”.   


  1. HI Mary V

    Wow! That would of been really scary. If I was in your shoes I would have been screaming my head off.
    I like how your are descriptive. You must of been relifed that it was just your Dad

    Keep up the awesome blog post cant wait for more

  2. Hello Mary,

    Wow that was a really good writing and funny. I couldn't stop laughing at the ending bit. You really can write girl. Keep it up Mary! :)

    Sincerely From Asena!!! :)


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